I Got Them!! Thanks Everyone :*

Saturday 21st March 2015 was World Poetry Day and on my facebook page The Word Korner I challenged a few aspiring poets like myself to post  a piece of their work on my page. I received two poems another person was too shy to post but I've had the honour of reading and listening to her work and she is talented. here are the two poems I received.

that poem was written by Ryan Bachoo and the other by Judine Ryan, funny how her surname is his first name... lol
Judine Ryan is also in my communications via social networking class and she has a blog LEZLINE
check it out....

ZONING

You looking at me, looking at you trying to unlock you

I’m guessing your password starts with I

Because I’m encrypted inside your secret files

I’m not over ambitious so I’m waiting for you to reveal the personal thoughts

Explain why our eyes are lost in a daze looking at me, looking at you

Insane feelings, I swear I hear your voice screaming

Through the noise

Hopeless feelings

Living on fallacies I’ve already connected all her dots

These crazy games we play for thrills, stirring confusion

Comforting lies that she was beyond me 
And I was just a voyeur seeking pleasure on her bareness

Looking for the brighter side

Our brighter side is deeper than unearthed treasures

Deeper and darker than undiscovered galaxies

She’s untouched, untainted, disguised

Our worlds are a nostalgic catastrophe

She’s exciting,  misery masquerading as strangers 

Camouflaged, impatiently waiting 
Watching her smiles wasted on the randomness of unsystematic admirer 
Broken records with over played, shabby line like girl “you’re too beautiful to be here alone”

Rushed words, misinterpreted, ruin intimate exchange

Looking at her, looking at me this delinquently romantic escapade, 
We’re over lust Over analyzed…girl come over here and talk to me

So thanks guys and please feel free to post your poetry on The Word Korner.

On another note I wrote a poem about forgiveness. Forgiving is where I fall short and I have ruined alot relationships because of my inability to forgive :( . My dad says it, My mom says it and now I see it. So stay tuned for my spoken word poem about forgiveness!